|Reviews for last dance|
| tarnished oversoul 11/16/08 . chapter 1
don't waste words.
a poem should only ever be as many words as it takes to say what you're saying.
which this does, quite well.
| none of burt's beeswax 11/4/08 . chapter 1
i love it. it's melodic, and sh like a secret only we can hear. pretty pretty