Yay! The kissed! Yay x3

Love it so far!

There were a lot more mistakes than usual, which surprised me. I like the nervous tenderness that they expressed. It's very real. But I am still sad they're not together...

I think that Stephen is becoming the antagonist in my mind. Matty is still my favorite. :]

Br it made me shiver... I still want to hug him!

Matty..poor, poor Matty..He's so sad and miserable... I want to hug him!

...D: this one made me sad...

I felt the bitterness...Arguing isn't always bad, actually. (I think... ) or maybe that's just my pitiful self talking, and realism has left my mind.

Matty! where's Matty? It's good she's independent, though :3

Aww, that's cute, them talking about marriage. They should totally get married. What I think (personally) is that they should have more strange/weird, yet interesting conversations. Such as past lives, like if they believe in them or not. Maybe religion, or what they like in people.

if you want a simply fantastic romance movie that will give you SO many ideas, look up 'Before Sunrise'with Julie Deply and Ethan Hawke.

IN-LAWS! The dreaded part of a relationship. At least they were nice, right? Matty seemed to do quite well, luckily. It's nice they were able to get along, and not have an ambulance in the end. :3

A great, small, happy family-ish group. Some mistakes with 'his, hers," etc, but the rest was great. good job :]

Aww all the guys want Eli. I can imagine that, actually. How DID Matty pay for all that? It was worth it, I can see. That's so cute!

Cute! There should be some event (like new years, christmas, valentines day) or something! It would be so romantic. I'm so happy for Matty and Eli

This chapter got faster and faster as I read, which is awesome. "sprayed some ore lines" I suddenly thought of WoW... The paintings are so detailed, it's awesome.

Oh! They're going to live with each other! Aw! ..But what about Andrew in the room WITH them?