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Monev11235 2008-12-02 . chapter 1
*Coughs and sneaks in late*

Mech: Myriad
Orig: Chiomi
Best: Myriad
Catseye*Rose 2008-12-01 . chapter 1
Mechanics: Myriad

Originality: Chiomi

Best: Fenrir

Ah, fun lot XD
watchdog 2008-12-01 . chapter 10
Mechanics—This is a hard one for me becaust all of them seem very well put together.

Vote-The Dream Team By Myriad

Originality—This one was a little easier for me. I realy like the reinvention of Beauty And The Beast.

Vote-La Vie En Rose By Chiomi

Best—With this one I have to gopick the one that has the Department Of Defence in it if only because I work for the DoD.

Vote-Dream Team By Myriad
Chiomi 2008-11-29 . chapter 1
Originality: Fenrir
Mechanics: Tronion
Best: BlackCat
Myriadragon 2008-11-28 . chapter 1
A lot of good ones this month...hard to choose!

Mech: Chiomi
Orig: Tronion
Best: Fenrir
Myriadragon 2008-11-28 . chapter 9
Okay I kind of loved it...:)
Myriadragon 2008-11-28 . chapter 8
I am now a puddle of goo capable only of sighing and saying "aw" and am therefor unable to properly review this :)
Myriadragon 2008-11-28 . chapter 4
Wow. I don't entirely get it, but this was really good. Also makes me worry about you. I love you?
Myriadragon 2008-11-28 . chapter 2
Question:

Couldn't she get the marriage annulled if they don't consummate it?

Love that the police made a half-hearted attempt to arrest him :)

I liked the beginning part and the very end, but the middle dragged. Overall it could be longer and more involved. Also, how many times are you going to re-write Beauty and the Beast? :P
henred5 2008-11-28 . chapter 1
Mechanics: The Heart's Complexion By: Scholar
[Very interesting and I liked the idea of a birth of a friendship of two children]

Originality: The Dream Team By Myriad
[Read this twice and loved it!]

Best: La Vie En Rose By Chiomi
[overall adore it. So cute and with a neat ending]
henred5 2008-11-28 . chapter 10
GUH! I can actually picture the scenes, pretyt gory andvery scary.

But loved it...though was kidna short, maybe add a bit more in the middle.
henred5 2008-11-28 . chapter 9
Not my cup of hot chocolate, but it would be my cup of coffee. If I could find one I liked! So all in all veyr itneresting.
henred5 2008-11-26 . chapter 8
Very soppy and lovy dovy if you get what I mean. Though it ties in well with Christmas...not that I celebrate it.
henred5 2008-11-26 . chapter 7
Beginning was confusing, probably cause I never read the last part that your wrote, ff there was a last part, but other then that is was some p[retty good writing.
henred5 2008-11-26 . chapter 6
cute n simple in that canny good way. But it needed some deeper plot to it.
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