Awesome. Yes, I love evil vampires! You rarely see them nowadays with the Twilight crazy going on. Finally, my love of vampires is being revived, slowly...
Must write more!
~Grey

...ooh...
(is quite fascinated)
I have something of an obsession with vampires. It's lasted since I was twelve and shows no signs of dying yet. I love your writing style, and the twist at the end was positively excellent. Well... frankly, I just love the whole oneshot. One of my frequent daydreams (I daydream most of the time, and sometimes I get repeats) is about a girl being murdered at a party. The music plays so loud, no one hears her screams... hmm... (if it were a cartoon, a lightbulb might appear above her head.) I have to write that. Don't worry- I won't steal ideas from here, xD.
Truly excellent oneshot- I'll look forward to reading the rest of your stuff.
Much Love

Isilthrar

Again, you threw me way off the scent. Much like the poor lady. Seems like you have a knack for that. :D

Very interesting, and I liked it more than your other stories (Though I like the one about the stalker... but not the one about Master) This one was very good, you should write longer stories :) You're very good *noddles*

Lol, nice, didn’t see that one coming, very cool. (Decided not to juxtapose the formal and informal review this time… it made me giggle too much. ^_^) I liked the twist, and the details, and, the vivid descriptions, and I didn’t not like any of it (so there, miss lack of confidence) :P (and this one didn’t leave me hangin’ Thankyou!)

Wow didn't see that coming at all! Great twist!
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Elz
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Whoa, DID not see that coming. That was really well done.