Hahahahahahahahahahahha wow totally saw that coming. Um not :P

Wow. Uh, nice twist. Totally didn't see it coming.

this is weird. :) maybe write a continuation? i would love to read a bit more.

So unexpected and funny.:D

OMG I needed that. that was a good laugh! lol LOVE IT!

I have gotten into lots of staring contests with some boys, and I am tempted to stab them. Haha, nice story.

So unexpected... wonderful!

Whoa the ending was super random! Expected yet unexpected!

funny. something i'd do.

...

Ahaha I loved that ending! I thought it was going to be some gushy fluff thing, you totally misled me! My conclusion is that random fork stabbings are quite funny.

She lost her calm :)

Cute story!

And for the preview: I guess Burr is more observant that Jay would like. He is falling fpr the girl. And he's having problems keeping their pact secret.

Can't wait to read more.

That one-shot was...disturbing, to say the least. :) Did the guy die? I hope not. But regardless, it was very well written, so yay for you! :)