second last stanza: 'she looks at me and/asks' :)

i love your style of poetry, it's so broken and beautiful. the last stanza is bloody amazing.

"Yesterday, she watched over the world." Absolutely beautiful opening line! :)

I loved the tragic tone of this poem!

OH MY GOD: "She looks at me and asks, 'Who is the girl they took away?'" That part was brilliant; sad, but brilliant! :D

This entire piece was amazing, and shows that your writing is maturing with grace.

Well Done! :D