Oh man. Definitely continue? :)
Love it. :)

I actually really liked this! I'm so glad to see more of Alandra High. I missed it ^_^. You've got me intrigued as to what's gonna happen at the party, and the Adam thing was really interesting. Kind of threw me for a loop, but it also intrigued me. I want to know what's going to happen with Adam. The little Italic bit at the end was cool. I like that Frankie cares about his brother, and doesn't want to go party because of the conversation he overheard.

I think you should keep going with this, even if you have to slog through the Bog of the Middle. This story has a great potential, and I don't think you should give up. Keep going. I'll be waiting for the next chapter!

~Ara

Huh. This was actually a nice break for me. No girl trauma, no picking and choosing, just getting to know other people. Very nice.
So let's see, Frankie's been drunk, high, and is being fought over by two girls(maybe not literally, but still...), is there anything else he's gonna do? I love reading your story because I never know what kind of crazy antics Frankie's going to get into next!
What made it even better(at least for me) was that you incoporated "The Breakfast Club" into it. I love that movie! Adn not only were they watching it, but it seemed like wach of the characters in the chapter was one of the characters in "The Breakfast Club"(except Frankie).

So now, it's time for the next chapter...wait, WHERE IS IT?! That's all you've written?! GAH?! Where's the next chapter?

Update quick, or you'll drive me crazy!
Congrats again in getting over your Writer's Block!

~Ara

YEA! More Alandra High! I am so happy! Congrats on getting over the Writer's Block, it KILLER!
This chapter was kind of interesting for a couple of reasons. I got introduced to more characters-which was fun, cause of the labels Frankie gives them(tee hee)-and I got to see a little of how the rest of the school sees Frankie(or at least, how some of them see Frankie--a a jock^_^)
I also really like the way you eneded this chapter. Bring on the dry Humor! YES!

And there's another chpater up too! YEA! I get to read two!
Can't wait!

~Ara

omg...that was AMAZING!! i practically sank into the novel!!xD

That was AWSOME!! it was so great i read it 3 times! GREAT JOB!
KEEP WRITING!=D

I love The Breakfast Club. Just saying.
I know that you know this, but I'm going to say this, anyway. The story is made of awesome. Amazing characterization, well-written, fantastic sense of humor.
So, I was going to write more here to make this review seem long and eloquent, but.
Ciao.

Oh my gosh. You are the first person whose story I have read, whose character has purple eyes. In my story, I have a character purple eyes. So yeah, that was completely random. I like it so far. :]

Li is just, I don't know. Too intense for me.

Ari-babes is way better!

But I have a feeling that what I want doesn't exactly affect decisions made.

Am I right?

Tell me I'm right.

Do you have Grey's in Egland? Ah, Eggland? That would be England, wouldn't it?

aaha. byye! bella.

I like reviewing. It's good. Is good, is fun. Is yummy.

Grey's Anatomy's on tonight! Wo!

This just continues to get ever more interesting.

Sorry, but it I was you, I'd kill off Li. I mean, pussy or WHAT?

And Ariadne is just fantastic the way she is...

However... how can she hate jocks and suchlike if she's into les sports herself? That's my only comment.

boiy. bella.

MY tennis coach was married... Does it still count if they were divorced two months later?

I say YES! :D

Yes is a HAPPY word.

Isn't it, children.

AHh, I'm copying the music teacher at our school.

She seriously does sound like that.

No kidding.

Aahaha, and if you even DARE swear in her class...

Pfft.

She'll just make you say five happy words in compensation...

"Sugar, honey, ice, tea..."

"Don't go trying to pull the wool over MY eyes, Miss Perkins, I'm not dense."

"Sorry, Miss. Bed, doona, pillow, eyemask and z... Are they alright, Miss Rennie?"

"Yes, Isabella. But I'd prefer you didn't sleep in my class. We're HAPPY and ENERGETIC here, aren't we girls?"

No...

"YES!"

And that is a recount of today's musical hour. LOVELY! Bhahaha.

ecks. oh. ecks. oh. bye. bella.

Yo!

Lexo!

Suppies, Supper? ;)

I've just decided, in the twenty minutes previously spent applying valuable brainpower to homework, that I... can't remember what I was going to write. HATE that!

Umm, but yahhrrgh. C'est tres bien, non? Oh, and "votre récit est très bien!" Yes! You could say, though, that these phrases are the only french in my vocabulary.

"Now," you may ask, "what's the point of this weirdo's comment? What a loser!" But, I do, in fact, have a very valid reason. Oh, ooh, more french coming... "J'ai raison..." HA! Um...

Now I've forgotten again. Oh, right. Procrastination. I've read random chapters from five stories consecutively, and now I'm trying to figure out how all of the main characters would get on if they had to go to the same school/workplace/whatever.

What with all the murders and divorces and infidelity and rape, there'd never be anyone around. My golly goodness, I am very sorry for wasting your time, writing this review.

Actually, I'm not. I want to write a REALLY long one so that, you know, I can use as many of the allocated characters in sensible (kind of) speech as I can.

You didn't understand a word of that, did you? No?

Ah well. At least I did. And you'll have twenty reviews too! Wo.

AHahahahaha,a... I'm bored now. Bye ! x. bella.

Lex! I loved this. Its so interesting, and Im waiting to see who he chooses! I love how you use AIM alot, too.

Im personally voting for Ari, but Li is good too :D

Update!

Hee. Hee. You LUV getting your characters into awkward situations, huh? I love reading about it. Frnakie allergic to mud, that's kind of intersting. Certainly something I haven't heard of before. Quick character check: Adam is the one who got married earlier, yes?
I though it was a great surprise that Li AND Ari showed up at the golf course. Talk about an awkward sitaution! So...who's he gonna choose? Waht an awesome way ot end a chapter!

Can't wait for chapter 12!
~Ara

WE!
Great chapter! Great! Great! Great! Sucha fun day! I have a question, though. Is Li Asian? If that seems like a racist question I give you permission to scold me. Even though its just an innocent inquisition. I am jealous of Frankie. Just substitute two pretty girls with two handsome boys. :D
Love it!

Love always and a day,
Victoria. :)