 SuzyJane 2009-06-02 . chapter 8your story is amazing... it reminds me that I shouldn't always choose the safe route and that everyone needs to have a little color in their lives... I think your story was a rainbow... :) |
 Lily Marie 2008-12-07 . chapter 8Wow. I'm kind of sad this is over! I really enjoyed it. I can't wait until you put the squeal up.
Yours Truly,
MP |
 Radioactive Jeans 2008-12-06 . chapter 8WOW.
The ending was AWESOME. I swear, I almost cried. It hit me so hard.
And I love the idea of a sequel. I shall be waiting for more eloquence. :D
Awesome job! Keep it up! |
 sarah loves charts. 2008-12-05 . chapter 8NEED SEQUEL NAOW oh wow. I'm so sad that it ended on such a bittersweet note, but it was beautiful. Can't wait to see a sequel and I want some hxc Caleb x Isabella-ness to occur. XD Just because I'm a teenie and a secret hopeless romantic like that.
Wonderful, WONDERFUL story, all the way till the very end. :) |
 Jaden Ink 2008-12-03 . chapter 7DEVELOPE THE PLOT DEVELOPE DEVELOP! THERE COULD BE LIKE A WHOLE BUNCH MORE TO THE STORY! |
 sarah loves charts. 2008-12-03 . chapter 7AH! Wow. I KNEW that a little mini-confrontation between Emery and Caleb would be absolutely necassary. And it was done wonderfully. I really did miss Isabella in this chapter, but it's, of course, better that she wasn't there at all. Caleb needed his time to ponder and brood.
I would love for you to continue this, as I love your characters and think it's simply wonderful. Great update, as usual. :) |
 Radioactive Jeans 2008-11-28 . chapter 6My gosh, do you know what I did when I was reading? I was clamping down on my mouth with my hands. I couldn't help but scream and panic. I saw it all in my head clearly and it was just, WOW. It's like watching a movie.
Awesome job again. I know how Caleb feels about the waiting part! |
 Jaden Ink 2008-11-28 . chapter 6OMG i'm so proud of bella!
and caleb.. awe... emery is a douch.. but not really... i love danny.. clara reminds me of alice still... i want to kill the dad... |
 sarah loves charts. 2008-11-28 . chapter 6WONDERFUL update! Mrs. Blake is a horrible individual. God, that made me so mad I can hardly stand it.
I feel so sorry for Isabella and Caleb... But Isabella took a big step, standing up to her father like that. And Caleb was as heroic as he could have been in such a situation.
I really, really like Danny, despite how relatively minor his part has been so far.
Great chapter; absolutely cannot wait for more. |
 Radioactive Jeans 2008-11-26 . chapter 5Oh my gosh. Do you know how happy you've made me? :D
That was really good. But the cliffie... it's killing me. It's really really really killing me! You did an awesome job of describing her painting. I can actually see her old pastel one and then her new one and it's just WOW. I feel so proud of Isabella too.
And the kiss. Holey freakin' crap. I think my heart stopped for a full minute. LOL. This is just absolutely awesome. Keep it up!
I'll be sitting in front of my computer, waiting for your next update. HAHAH. |
 Lily Marie 2008-11-25 . chapter 5Wow, this is really good. I can't wait to read more!
Yours Truly,
Lily Marie |
 Jaden Ink 2008-11-25 . chapter 5AWE!
CELLA FOR EVER! lol clara reminds me kind of like Alice cullen and the statment about "what thats her name isn't it?" reminded me of Emmett so cute! |
 sarah loves charts. 2008-11-25 . chapter 5Oh. I was so thrilled to see an update!
Caleb is just... There are no words. He's definitely my favorite character. I adore him.
This was so sweet. I'm normally not one for romances, but I squeeled when Caleb kissed Isabella.
Eagerly awaiting another update! You're ~amazing. :) |
 sarah loves charts. 2008-11-17 . chapter 4AH! I was just wondering when an update for this would roll along... and then surprise! It came when I least expected it.
Caleb... Wow. yeah, do I love Caleb.
The fact that Isabella managed to speak up to her father, even if it was just a brief little moment, was great. I'm sure she's never done that before. And her brother is a sweetheart.
I can't wait for more! sdklghsdfg. |
 the goddess walks 2008-11-09 . chapter 3Really well written. Straight romance isn't normally my thing and normally I find the heroine with low self worth to be generally over done, however I want to see what happens next. In a couple of chapters you've made the characters interesting to me.
Thanks. |