[No one to catch you as you fly] Interesting. It's usually catch you as you /fall/, so I like how you twisted the image from that to surprise the reader. It's also a thought-inspiring concept, to need someone to catch you as you go up.

Beautiful refrain. So comforting, and the concept of "baby" and "crawl" fit togther nicely. I love the image of "holding the world still."

Sparkles from the Review Marathon (link in profile)

That's so sweet and so sad.

You've changed and I haven't kept up. Now I feel bad.

I like the poem, though. Very much so.

FABULOUS!

Narq