Wow, you made it seem like this was gonna be crap but it kicks **. You have a very clear mind, and it's easy to see in the sober flow of this poem, which really doesn't seem to mind getting lost and finding its way back, as you said. I cry like, what, once every other year, but I definitely could relate to the overall mood. Good job, this has a very 'fall' theme to it, it really embodies the whole feeling of the season. Really, good job.

aw i absolutely love it! maybe brain-vomit is a good thing! i can tell what you're feeling... good use of words!!