 Alteng 2008-11-07 . chapter 1Good to see you back!!
It is a shame that you have deleted your other stories. I was enjoying a good many of them. I hope that you will bring them back at some point in time when the mood takes you.
As for this story, it is an interesting enough of a start. I am unsure what purpose the human can hold for this story, because the Broggat's don't seem to understand Common very well.
This had a good beginning and lead into the problem. I hope that you can stay and write for awhile. |