humm, this piece is very interesting to me, sounds an awful lot like you my dear. but only one thing i know i suck at grammar so forgive me if i'm wrong but shouldn't there be an "ing" on wear in this sentence "years worth wear the scapegoat mask" ?

I think the second line should have a period after it.

I like how the piece goes. Presenting all the maybes and then ending with the fact that you should just ask her. It's such a great point. So true to life.

I like all the maybes also, they definitely make you think and are interesting, especially the mask one. Nice job.

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