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consumption of space
Isca
2008-11-04 . chapter 1
"Undefined." I liked that part; it fit well with the 'puzzle' part.
"Churning chambers." Great alliteration!
smile for the sunshine
2008-11-04 . chapter 1
beautiful imagery. you paint a nice picture.
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