|Reviews for Dreaming|
| HelpMePlease 1/22/09 . chapter 1
m I am absolutely in love with the 2nd last line:
"Misery is what makes her mine"
| a certain slant of light 11/5/08 . chapter 1
It's... serene. And sad. I love it. :)
| fairytale failure 11/4/08 . chapter 1
I loved your imagery in the first stanza, especially "moonbeams shatter on the caves of her cheeks", and I think the idea of choosing her being sad over not having her is very interesting. However I don't think the last line really makes sense grammatically - something other than 'that'.