I have to say that the structure, the physical layout, was enjoyable. The anonymous feel you gave to the character was also a great way to portray your story.

Dear goodness, you're right. What happened to the knights in shining armor?? The damsels are broken and bleeding, the knights, drunken and falling. But the romance still has a chance, doesn't it??

That was so sweet...i loved it!! Really really good job. :)

OOh that was cute. Great story, well written too. I loved how you had "Chivalry was dead" and "The damsel in distress was dead" all throughout the story.

That was so sweet! Well written!

I was writing you a nice long review when my internet blinked out and I lost what I had typed. But since, I really though this deserved a nice long novel length review I started it up again. All right, a few mistakes I caught…starting with: “damsel is distress was dead, but she fluttered” is should be in. Next: “or that they were later for their reservation” later should be late, I believe? Easy mistakes to make, nothing a little proofreading won’t fix. I didn’t see any comma mistakes, so you’re good to go on that.

I really like this…I found it slightly bittersweet with the unnamed boy and girl and how they treated each other. I found it really cute that the boy doesn’t complain about his car getting all messy.

The repeating of the sayings helped with the flow and gave it a nice sound when reading it.

Good Job, I liked this one a lot.