Really good story. The style is unique, and it was gripping :D nice ending too.

I would read this over and over and over again.

Geez, it's that addicting.

:)

Thanks for bringing it to fictionpress.

Ah
I love this story!
How can it be over.
I'm so glad that they are finally together and that they are going to have a baby.
Your wording and transitions were very good. Umm... yea the writing itself was good.
I wish that they were able to communicate with words but no words are needed in their relationship...
She has an almost childlike innocence... she's intelligent yet she seems so... well clueless I suppose.
I would love to see them evolve as characters and as a couple...
This is a really good story :)

This story sounds very interesting.
It caught my attention right away and made me want to continue reading to figure out who this woman was.
The image of skinning human beings and using their skin for a book cover is very disturbing but then again it adds a eery mood to the story.

NO! IT CAN'T STOP HERE! This was really good. I was kinda skeptical at first -- the summary wasn't very appealing, but i decided to give it a try, and i am really glad i did. There were literlly NO mistakes in grammer that i cought and usually i am a shark for grammer mistakes. This was really good. Although i wish that it hadn't ended so abruptly. Very well written!

This is turning out really weel. I love your style. Its very wordy-- great vocab, an di love that in an author. I can't wait to read the next chapter, but sadly, i have to sleep. I guess thats kinda important every now and then. Good job. :)

CrazyCowgirl101

Aw, that is the best ending!

It was sort of confusing at first when it switched Point of Views, but it was fine near the end :)

Miles

xx

hey,GryphonFledglingOfSilverWings
this is a lovely story, l have read it till the end and i am impressed, very impressed. you created characters not just puppets as most action stories tend to have, i love your style of writing and i will try to read your other works. once again, kudos for the good work.

Great story. Thanks for writing it and bringin' it to fictionpress. Do you know fighting styles or moves, because your knowledge seemed to be exemplified here. I thought the climax in the story would be Red pairing with Quina but you dragged out the story, having them separated, which in turn was wonderful for the plot as well. I really liked how underneath it all, this was another interracial fic (I don't often get to read many of those) and how it seemed you proved that love can be expressed past words, ect. And, the story was not mushy, not like a cliche chick flick with the guy bringing the girl to the movies. Twas awesomely-fantasmal I'd have to say. Thanks for sating my fictionpress hunger. :)

Even for the first chapter, this is a very good story. It's interesting. Good job. :)

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I love the epilouge! :D
Really amazing story. :)

Yay! You made it! Well done!

I like the ending. When the fighters revolted, I was afraid you were going to kill them (it would have worked, from a storyline point of view, but I don't think anyone would forgive you for it).

I like the ending. Red's finally free, and he got to take Quina with him!

You should consider writing another story in this world. I'd love to read more and learn about the cultures, and why they're at war with each other.

And if I may: I'd love a more in-depth description of the setting. From what you've written, I know the characters really well, but my idea of their surroundings is very vague.

Anyway, Awesome story. You kept me on the edge of my seat throgh the whole thing, and hardly used any dialogue to do it. Impressive.

Congrats again on winning NaNo!

T_T *sniffles* It's so sad that the story is over. Ah... I'm glad they had their baby ^.~ And she/he's free! Yay! You better tell me when you're done with editing this.

I was ready to sharpen my knifes as I begun reading this chapter, and coming after you. The idea of facing them of against each other is brilliant, but Red would never have harmed her really, and so he would have sacrificed himself. Luckily, you took it somewhere else. *puts away knifes* I'm a bit surprised with the herb witch part, why make her good all of a sudden.

Hmp, I wonder what the master is up to. I must go on.