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never-ender 2008-11-22 . chapter 7
I just have a tiny critique for your list, Oregon and Washington are part of the northWEST, not eh northeast :) I live in Washington btw, lol, just thought I'd mention it, great story so far! I really like it! :)
Auribus Teneo Lupum 2008-11-05 . chapter 4
i have to say that i'm really enjoying this story.
one question though, how did gabe end up meeting icarus? or does that come out later in the story?
Auribus Teneo Lupum 2008-11-04 . chapter 2
this is really, really interesting so far! keep going--i can't wait to see what happens!
MagicWords 2008-11-04 . chapter 2
How sad!
Oh my goodness, how sad for a small girl to live with that forever! Wow, my breath was taken away.
Just a note from the reader: i wouldnt bold the chapters unless it is for prologue or past tense reasons. it is sort of distracting to the eye.
but other thank that, very good! this story is bound to be super interesting!
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