awesome! u really need to update soon bcuz im entranced! AMAZING!

oh dear, this is gonna be funny as to what she says to the 'beasts' it'll be funny but it'll be interesting to see her family attack her too. it'll be great i like it already, up-date soon please.

Great story. I like it, no. I don't like it...I love it. Jace is such a calming person, yet her life falls apart when her Father dies. This is a REALLY good story. This is something I'll recommend to some of my friends.

very good, but short so update soon!

Very curious story. I look forward to your next update.

o good start, i think i'll keep waiting to read.