I love it! Keep it up and I hope you'll update soon :)

the story was good

Update, I demand it right now or I'll be heart broken:D

update! I love this story soooooooooo much! Please Please updaqte!

you haven't updated in a while! :( please update! If I can get more ppl to read the story will you please update! Pretty Pretty PLEAAASSSEE! This is my favorite story! So please update! Pretty please with a cherry on top! :D

OMG this is the BEST story I have EVER read! Pleeaaaaaaaassssseeeee Update! Pretty pretty please! All I want, is to read more!

I actually really liked this, which surprised me. I'll be honest, I was expecting it to be poorly written because of the vampire obsession that's going on right now, but I was nicely smacked in the face. I really like it so far; it's well written, I didn't spot any grammatical errors, and I like your characters and vocabulary. Good job, onto chapter two!

I want more! What happened to the other chapters?

Please continue. I have fallen in love with all of your characters. I want to know what is coming next. Is James going to cave and drink from Mia? Will Mia become a vampire also? What about Matthew, her mother, and Kerry? Will they change just to be with her forever? Please continue, don't keep me waiting.

Don't stop writing!

David is such a JERK!

By the way... Awesome action scene D

Nice chapter! I can feel for Carl considering I've visited nursing homes a lot. I wonder if Matthew was just being over protective or if he knows something he's not telling Mia.

I'm writing a story I haven't published and one of my leading characters is named Henry Johnson! :( :( :(

Oh well...

One word... AWESOME! I'm moving onto chapter 2! D

This story is off to a good start and I hope you keep continuing it as I keep reading it. I like the dialogue and the characters. They are well described.