|Reviews for Temptation of the Moon|
| fireinus 3/7/13 . chapter 7
I love it! Keep it up and I hope you'll update soon :)
| Guest 8/6/12 . chapter 7
the story was good
| Mak3 5/26/12 . chapter 7
Update, I demand it right now or I'll be heart broken:D
| Nina 9/1/11 . chapter 7
update! I love this story soooooooooo much! Please Please updaqte!
| MimiItou 8/31/11 . chapter 1
you haven't updated in a while! :( please update! If I can get more ppl to read the story will you please update! Pretty Pretty PLEAAASSSEE! This is my favorite story! So please update! Pretty please with a cherry on top! :D
| Selina 8/30/11 . chapter 7
OMG this is the BEST story I have EVER read! Pleeaaaaaaaassssseeeee Update! Pretty pretty please! All I want, is to read more!
| FightCrime.ShootBack 7/10/10 . chapter 1
I actually really liked this, which surprised me. I'll be honest, I was expecting it to be poorly written because of the vampire obsession that's going on right now, but I was nicely smacked in the face. I really like it so far; it's well written, I didn't spot any grammatical errors, and I like your characters and vocabulary. Good job, onto chapter two!
| Angela 6/12/10 . chapter 7
I want more! What happened to the other chapters?
| Yolanda West 2/19/10 . chapter 7
Please continue. I have fallen in love with all of your characters. I want to know what is coming next. Is James going to cave and drink from Mia? Will Mia become a vampire also? What about Matthew, her mother, and Kerry? Will they change just to be with her forever? Please continue, don't keep me waiting.
| ImmortalDreams 1/28/10 . chapter 7
Don't stop writing!
| ImmortalDreams 1/28/10 . chapter 4
David is such a JERK!
By the way... Awesome action scene D
| ImmortalDreams 1/28/10 . chapter 3
Nice chapter! I can feel for Carl considering I've visited nursing homes a lot. I wonder if Matthew was just being over protective or if he knows something he's not telling Mia.
| ImmortalDreams 1/28/10 . chapter 2
I'm writing a story I haven't published and one of my leading characters is named Henry Johnson! :( :( :(
| ImmortalDreams 1/28/10 . chapter 1
One word... AWESOME! I'm moving onto chapter 2! D
| zeck-zeecola8 4/13/09 . chapter 1
This story is off to a good start and I hope you keep continuing it as I keep reading it. I like the dialogue and the characters. They are well described.