This story is off to a good start and I hope you keep continuing it as I keep reading it. I like the dialogue and the characters. They are well described.

*squeels in joy* So far, you haven't ruined your story like a lot of other authors do! *glomps you* I'm loving this story so much, and I can't wait for you to update!

*twitches* I have combed through this site for vampire stories more times that I can count...and I honestly have no idea how I've missed this one. So far, this story is amazing. I'll be sure to keep writing to see what happens next. :-D

You are awesome!

Poor James :(
I'm sure he didnt mean to kill the hunter,
even if he was going to kill James.

Great Writing,
keep going!

amazing chapter!
I can't believe David did that.
I used to think he was the cute and sweet one..
how wrong I was.
Poor, Mia.
I knew James was going to be there; he's like her guardian angel.
Does he like her?

Keep writing, you're an amazing author :)

amazing!
keep writing.
: )

wow, awesome story would love to hear more, or more so read more... Good job so far

the mind ponders if james and mia will ever be??
lol

good luck wth rest of it!

this story is absolutely amazing, i seriously cant stop reading it but i'm going to have to tear myself away from my laptop screen because i have to be up for college in 3 hours..oops

seriously, i'm hooked

Emilii Farrar 17/UK

what happened, no more chapters? i love this story :(

This story is awesome, when are you adding the next chapter??

I LOVE THIS STORY! PLEASE WRITE MORE SOON! =D=D=D=D=D
happy new year!

Omg I luv it where is the next chapter??!! Please email me when u get it up at ...u really r a good author...it's seems like an actual book...one that I'd definitely read!

It's pretty good.

I love this story! Please write more soon! i check everyday :)

I love your story!! Update Soon! I think it was good to put one chapter into James' perspective to give us, the reader, a taste of his world.
-Kia