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Reviews For: The Public Toilet
Crysta Mayville 2008-11-07 . chapter 1
Kind of gross, but I still liked it.
al michaels 2008-11-06 . chapter 1
I think it is hard to write a story in second person and you came really close to doing it very well.
NearlyPrescient 2008-11-05 . chapter 1
nice.
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