Aw! Their first kiss was each other :D That's so sweet! Love

Me again :D "“seems to be having some difficulty excepting responsibility.”" excepting = accepting "The redhead starched the back of his head with his free hand and laughed." starched = scratched "she apologized, but then smiled. “I’m so glad you’re back, Setsu-san,” he hugged him and then pulled away, he should probably be a she :)"“This is something he’ll have to except and I need to be patient.”" except = accept :)

Hee! Love this so much! I shall keep reading.. I just noticed an error :D On the whole, your grammar/spelling is really good, which is a nice change >.> "sad at having to stop the one thing that gave him power over the author." author = other... Although...

these are so cute! i'd love to see another Makoto/Reiji pairing, they seem so sweet ^ ^ but any new pairing would be marvelous.

Yay! Juli-chan! I loved this chappie and no problem being beta. It was a joy! ^_^v Like I said, you are making me want Itawaru for myself. Luv ya!

Wow that was really cute!! i really liked it. You did a really good job on this one. i liked that the story Ita-kun was writing was the reason Mitsuko got his/her name and how he became a princess. I really liked it. Well I'll talk to you later. ^_^ (but where's all the eiichi parts ^/^ lol)

Hehehe...so ya did the box set? LOL!! That is amazing! Luv ya!

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