wow, that was a very deep analysis of Crane.

I feel sorry for all of them.

what?

hurray for humor, but Jacob never really answered any of his questions.

Jacob is being kind of stupid...

why does everyone hate hospitals? it is a wonder anyone is a doctor with all of this hospital hate going around.

Wow! I have no idea what happened and yet I still love it!

I like it

This story looks very interesting and I am looking forward to reading it.

... I lied lol. I was about to close my browser and go to bed, but then I was all... but.. I wants to reads! lol and thus I did- and was rewarded!

:D Teh smex! lols I was a happy panda ^^

Also -shifty eyes- I'm really starting to like Crane as a character. So many layers to the little crazy, its hard not to be pulled in. I loved the chapter from his point of view. Another one in the future? Maybe? ^^

Are you going to update soon? -puppy eyes-

Aww.. Its all coming to light.

What did Aidan and Crane's parents do? I think I may have missed it lol. At least Aidan finally knows the truth.. what will he do now? :S Try to find out what company Crane might be working for?

I love the name Crane btw ^^

Also, did you make your 50k by the deadline? :)

I shall review Chapter Nine tomorrow as its definately bedtime for me lol.

Happy Birthday!

Aw, poor kid :( Somebody get the kid a balloon!

Just a question, why don't you use-- I have no idea what they're called lol, instead of don't you use do not. Just curious lol although, now that I went back and looked, my point is kind of moot. Maybe I just noticed one or two.

And sorry it took me so long to read and review, my exams are next week. I can hardly catch enough time to breath these days, let alone do fun things.

I'm starting to feel bad for Crane :( I think he needs a hug too.

Aw, sorry it took me so long to review :( Its been on my list of things to do for days already.

At least the trust is somewhat back between Aidan and Jacob :) I still feel in the dark though lol Mysteries have never been my thing for the sole reason that I fail to follow their complex plots. Also, I'm horrible at putting clues together.

How's NaNo going? Still going strong? :) What's your wordcount at? I'm thinking about doing NaNo in December since I have an entire month off (lol, Dec. 7 to Jan. 7- whoot!).. I need to fufil so many social obligations I've been neglecting though lol. I'm so bad with keeping in touch with friends.

I definatly understand why Aidan couldn't promise not to look for answers. It's hard to turn off curiousity.

As always, I'll be following the updates! ^^

Whew! I finally got a stable enough connection to leave a review :) I read your new chapter yesterday but ran out of time at the end so I just finished up the last little bit and now I have time for a review! Yays :)

Tricky business with that whole computer log on and calling! So clever ^^

Aw, evil Crane :( This is getting quite complex. So if he's not in jail, where is he? ... I would have checked under the bed >.>

Yay! I'm loving this super update system you've got going on here!

My favorite part of the NaNo idea is getting so close to the story- since you're working on it either mentally or physically 24/7 for a month lol.

I really like how you're developing Aiden :) where did you get the inspiration for both he and Jacob? Jacob is so delightfully unique ^^

I can't help but wonder, at the back of my mind, if you're playing a sneaky mind game plot in this piece- like Aidan himself is really Crane! lol.. speculate, speculate, speculate. I'll just have to buckle up and go along for the ride ^^