|Reviews for Chilled Dreams|
| ode to melancholy 11/7/08 . chapter 1
I think I like this new style of yours... Or love it. :D
| Narq 11/6/08 . chapter 1
ouch... beatifully icy
| Air Rey 11/6/08 . chapter 1
It's gripping, haunting, and disturbing, but I love it. It capture a good view of unending love. Your use of images is astounding especially the first images you created of someone somehow or somewhat touching a dead body. It's amazing. Although, some points sound a bit melodramatic. In general, the poem is good! Good job!
| dragonflydreamer 11/6/08 . chapter 1
I like the direction you're heading in with the italics because it gives a lot of meaning to those words. However, I do think you went a tad overboard and it got distracting after a while.
My favorite lines were "as the sugarglazed doughnuts/that caught in your throat;" I like the phrasing; it's interesting and unique.
Nice work :)
| Ernest Bloom 11/6/08 . chapter 1
this is funny; i like the addition reaction and imagine the vulnerability of an exposed pi-bond.