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Lily Llynn 2008-11-07 . chapter 1
I personally don't understand an attraction to younger guys, but perhaps that's just me. I also probably wouldn't have let him get off so easily. XD Cute, though, and awesome writing. I'm very glad found.eventually added this to our c2. (:
windyday 2008-11-07 . chapter 1
Well written. :). It's so true, too, every bit of it. I totally know where you're coming from. And goshdarnit if that guy would just pluck up the courage to ask I don't know if I'd like him anymore. Life sucks sometimes, huh?
andee lee 2008-11-07 . chapter 1
That was cute. :-)

I would have kicked that skank's **! LOL just kidding.

I really liked this.

-Andee :-)
found.eventually 2008-11-07 . chapter 1
Aw. I could imagine the scene, somehow. And for whatever reasons, I see a pretty disco ball. hahahahah.

Loved it, darl. Short and simple. And nice. Did I mention nice? :)
passionate4pens 2008-11-06 . chapter 1
This was really good!! That Girl was so annoying!! I hated her!!

Well done!

xoxoxo
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