aww I feel sorry for the girl.

Still very poetic. I really like it. It's so cute.

Wait this is about you? Wow. That's deep and poetic.

You should totally continue. And long distance sucks, babe =( lol i know. xx's.

flawless

very nicely done. i'm glad you updated. update soon?

That was so cute! I love the way they got together...so sweet. :)

That was adorable. I love the way this is written, it's pretty awesome. Where are they supposed to be, anyway?
Can't wait to read more! :)
Great job :D
-Aria

lovely chapter!!
thanks for continuing..it was really sweet

I sincerely liked that. It was a little different from the stories you wrote previously, but I can't pin down what exactly. But I like how this is headed towards ;D Keep up the good work!

That sounds so much like me some five years back. So much like my own writing it's somewhat sad. And then I read it's a very intimate writing...

I don't know your situation. I can only hope it's nothing like mine was. Missing someone who's far away; having the love of someone and loving them back but not being able to share anything face to face: that must be the hardest thing to go through. If you ever need to talk to someone, you can always e-mail me. I don't check my mail that often, but if you write to I'll make sure to write back. Sometimes it's hard to talk about things to people who has never been in that position.

On the writing: It looks like a raw draft and lacks some description, but it's probably what you wanted to accomplish. It looks like the thoughts straight from your head. I bet a lot of people liked it because of the raw feelings it gives.

That was so terribly sweet.

this chapter hit the romantic in me straight over the head with a knife
not pretty, let me tell you
now sleep woman! rest that pretty little head 'o yours

Wow..you've got to continue this...please!!

Whoever the female protagonist is, I want to pull them into a long long bear hug. ^_^ Raw and beautiful words they are. Usually like that when speaking of true strong emotions. I love it!

If you want to continue, sure, so long as you don't leave it half way. Perhaps writing/drawing out a clear plan before you start posting the chapters?

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