really awesome :)

This story is so cute! I love it!

This story is short but lovely, as though I am peeking into the narrator's life. Nice!

so adorable :)

it was good, I like it but you didn't really develope the chapters...other wise good work, im going to read some more of your work. =)

so. this is just about the cutest thing ever. just so you know. it has a content feeling of comfortable love... of happiness and home and holiday cookies. if you know what i mean. thanks for this, because i have a feeling it'll stick with me for a while.

Real Cute and Nice

lol aw cute story

This was a sweet story. I loved it

Haha, this is good. It kind of gives you that warm feeling after you read it. I would have like to seen a little more meat to it, more thoughts, not just information stated in hard paragraphs. The confession was also quite...stiff. I would have liked to seen it more natural, especially since it's just about the only dialogue in the piece. Otherwise, good!

Have a great day!
-DV-

it's a really good story but it seems a bit rushed.

cute. it didn't really keep my attention, but when i finally forced myself to read every word, it was cute. funny.

i loved this!
i got your story from that yahoo writers group! and its a great oneshot! i love it when characters just say it like so bluntly.
its amazing!
great one shot...i can't say it enough, i really can't!

lmao this girl is blunt. "I know you love Tiffany, but i love you." no small talk? LMAO this was ultra cute. im adding it to my C2

aww how cute =)