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Frayling0 2009-02-11 . chapter 12
CCX (post time): New characters abound! You enjoying this? Good. Season 16 finale next week!

^ That above just sums it up for me. No, no one is enjoying it, you have no reviews and your story is just purely dialogue with hundreds of characters, and a lack of any sense or storytelling ability. Please end this blown up monstrosity and write a proper story.
Frayling0 2009-01-22 . chapter 11
Far too much dialogue. The constant interjections of authors notes render the story unreadable. Little makes sense within the story. I'm sorry for writing a bad review... but I bet you can write a better story than this.
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