I find the plot interesting, and your characters are quite lively.

I am really looking forward to meet the rest of the characters you've mentioned. The Davis v Tyler drama looks like it will be interesting, I hope Davis doesn't get trampled on like typical boy-next-door characters! :[

You did a good job characterizing Ashley, we got to learn more about her as a character, and the outfit memory adds a sense of humor that is appreciated :)

Can't wait for when they finally make it to th show!

although your story has a good story-line and is quite interesting, it appears to me that you started writing as if you were Ashley, and then switched to someone else. I'm a little bit confused as to this and hopefully you will be able to sort the problem out.

Please edit and KEEP WRITING. This story is great other than the few blemishes.

It was a bit sudden that someone suggested they go and get kissed and the names Tyler and Taylor are very similar...

Interesting.. shall read on.

I like this idea!

Great rewrite :] I can tell you have your thoughts more together and that you have a plan for the story.

Just make sure to keep track of who's thinking what and try to add a little more detail so it's not too much dialogue.