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Reviews For: The Idea of Alex
Phoenixia 2008-11-26 . chapter 1
I haven't wandered over here for a long time, so I'd never read this one before. I like it - I can see the traces of White Houses, and the traces of reality, but it's also more than that - the Idea of Him, as it were. As the other reviewer said, you conveyed the feeling of infatuation fantastically. And, as always, I'm impressed by the way you write, it's always so evocative. :)
xNeverThought 2008-11-08 . chapter 1
You very accurately capture the essence of infatuation. It's very translatable. The sense of time passing is also well done - both long and aimless. I really enjoyed it.
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