Oh, I love this, I like the usage of the iconic "white cords." The rhyme scheme and flow are very nice, the poem is nice, funny, and true. Good work.
~mAg

Hilarious! Really good, I almost fell out of my chair laughing. Nice poem

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XD OMG what a poem haha!

Ok, negatives first. You seem to have a compulsion to rhyme, which sometimes leads to forced wordings. The first two lines of the poems are possibly the weakest ones. Strife? rife? Perhaps you should re-consider and re-word that part.

Best rhyming is when it is not too obvious. Vamoose and caboose does not fit in that category.

3rd stanza was definitely the best. Clever wordings and not so in-your-face rhyming! Last line of 3rd stanza made me chuckle, too. Truth is so amusing at times hehe.

- Frac

VERY funny. And very true. And I am feeling rather iGuilty now for not realizing just what this iPod has done.

Even if I only wear it around the house or when wandering my campus at 3 am. You never know.

Oi. I remember this. I still love it.
S

AWESOME! So totally creative...yes, aweseome. i don't really have anything bad to say about it. the last line was classic. you'll be happy to know that i do not own an ipod! very nice, very nice:)