|Reviews for Paperthin|
| BloodyRedRosses 8/25/11 . chapter 16
i love it! please update! :) its been dragging me around ever since i started reading it! lmao i found it yesterday night, because i was bored, and i didnt want to go to sleep so i could finish it! pleaseee pleaseeee update it! :)
| Bridgett-blah 1/17/11 . chapter 16
GR! I was hoping I wouldnt have to stop and wait for more! Ugh! MORE!
| Bridgett-blah 1/17/11 . chapter 10
Arg. I like Vitor. But still. It is kinda creepy. He's like, way older than her, right?
| Bridgett-blah 1/17/11 . chapter 9
Arg. Im so confused now. She's not supposed to like him. RILEY! Not Victor. Whatever. Haha.
| Bridgett-blah 1/17/11 . chapter 6
I like Riley for some reason. Oh my God, Im kinda jealous. I woulda liked to be on the back of a bike with some hot dude xD
| Bridgett-blah 1/17/11 . chapter 3
Oh my. Why's Riley such a jerk! I realy like this. Poor Janie. God, I can't imagine loosing my mom and my dad. And then having to move somewhere with a stranger. Wow.
| Halema 10/3/10 . chapter 16
luv this story
| DestineeVeree 3/22/10 . chapter 16
no what happened to riley? and i know thi might be a stupid question but what happned to rikku and elijah?
| The Cursed Instrument 6/7/09 . chapter 1
Great first chapter, just one simple word of advice which you don't have to take, is...make the audience more in suspence, you have level 1-100 down now from 101-200, it would be frantical if you did that and so much better.
It is so great wait I already said that, this story doesn't have enough words to describe the greatness of it.
-Parewhai future Author
| Evil Kittens Unite 12/6/08 . chapter 1
Only read the first chapter (so far, I mean), but I have to say that it's really creepy, especially Victor.
It seems interesting, but I'm not sure how I feel about the particular formatting. It's not that it's hard to read, but it's different- it may put some people off from reading the story. Which would be a shame, because it seems like you have a good idea and everything.
-Evil Kittens Unite
| Destiny1406 12/4/08 . chapter 1
I am totally glad i pushed you to finish this story. I want you to keep writing and add sequels to this amazing story. I've read this story like three times already and love it. I guess i'm going to have to push you harder cause you stopped writing! Beware! lol! I hope everyone enjoys my best friend's amazing, well written story. I also want to thank you rainyxdayz1306 for pushing me to finish my story too. LYLAS! Hope to see you soon!
| Alkedema 11/14/08 . chapter 12
this is a great story there is a lot of conflict in here and its well written. the characters all have a mind of their own. i wish there was a little more riley and janie action but i love it anyway keep it up!
| Pacie Baby 11/14/08 . chapter 12
i really love your story. very funny and entertaining. keep up the good work.
| iguessimlou 11/9/08 . chapter 1
I wish there was more to read.
Please keep writing.