i love it! please update! :) its been dragging me around ever since i started reading it! lmao i found it yesterday night, because i was bored, and i didnt want to go to sleep so i could finish it! pleaseee pleaseeee update it! :)

GR! I was hoping I wouldnt have to stop and wait for more! Ugh! MORE!

Arg. I like Vitor. But still. It is kinda creepy. He's like, way older than her, right?

Arg. Im so confused now. She's not supposed to like him. RILEY! Not Victor. Whatever. Haha.

I like Riley for some reason. Oh my God, Im kinda jealous. I woulda liked to be on the back of a bike with some hot dude xD

Oh my. Why's Riley such a jerk! I realy like this. Poor Janie. God, I can't imagine loosing my mom and my dad. And then having to move somewhere with a stranger. Wow.

Anyways, ONWARD!

hey

luv this story

plz update

no what happened to riley? and i know thi might be a stupid question but what happned to rikku and elijah?

Great first chapter, just one simple word of advice which you don't have to take, is...make the audience more in suspence, you have level 1-100 down now from 101-200, it would be frantical if you did that and so much better.

It is so great wait I already said that, this story doesn't have enough words to describe the greatness of it.

-Parewhai future Author

Only read the first chapter (so far, I mean), but I have to say that it's really creepy, especially Victor.

It seems interesting, but I'm not sure how I feel about the particular formatting. It's not that it's hard to read, but it's different- it may put some people off from reading the story. Which would be a shame, because it seems like you have a good idea and everything.

-Evil Kittens Unite

I am totally glad i pushed you to finish this story. I want you to keep writing and add sequels to this amazing story. I've read this story like three times already and love it. I guess i'm going to have to push you harder cause you stopped writing! Beware! lol! I hope everyone enjoys my best friend's amazing, well written story. I also want to thank you rainyxdayz1306 for pushing me to finish my story too. LYLAS! Hope to see you soon!

this is a great story there is a lot of conflict in here and its well written. the characters all have a mind of their own. i wish there was a little more riley and janie action but i love it anyway keep it up!

i really love your story. very funny and entertaining. keep up the good work.

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I wish there was more to read.

Please keep writing.