 redamiB6147 2009-03-29 . chapter 7I can see this being a popular song. like the lyrics alot. |
 redamiB6147 2009-03-29 . chapter 6another song with good beat. you wold make a great song writer |
 redamiB6147 2009-03-29 . chapter 5sounds like life. "and now she's left me all alone/ looking ot save teh world alone" reminds me of myself |
 redamiB6147 2009-03-29 . chapter 4interesting song. Another song with a good beat |
 redamiB6147 2009-03-29 . chapter 3another good song. I liket he beat of it, and I could see this becoming a popular song |
 redamiB6147 2009-03-29 . chapter 2I like the begining of this song the best. "You turn up the radio til you can't hear/The broken sound of the cries and tears" ~ defiantly can relate to that |
 redamiB6147 2009-03-29 . chapter 1this is a great song. I would love to hear the song preformed, but it looks like Im out of luck |