I hope you don't think that I say the following because you reviewed one of my stories earlier this week. That had nothing to do with how much I love this short story.

Although I would *never* do anything that brave, I could understand the main character's feelings for Ryan. Oh, I've had that deep feeling in my stomach when I'm near a certain girl many times-- it was like the character took my words out of my mouth!

Congrats, I am off to first find the song that this story was based off of and then to read more of your works. Good job :D

That was really cute...great job :)

it's so cute,some of the spelling and gramar were alittle off, but i enjoyed it!the boy in love seemed like the typical teenager.sincim a teen myself i could definitly relate with him and ryan.i like the fact that ryan had read wuthering heights because its one of my personal favorites(i've read it a couple times)itgave me a little more respect for her.

Aww that was nice.

Really nice piece of writing here, gives vivid mental images, and
that's what good work does.
You should really write more of it :)