"Neon autumn" is a very original descriptor for fall that I have never heard before. Kudos! I like. :)

"as we / Pretended to be strangers" This line is haunting. All of your tiny poems end in haunting lines. I like them very much.

However, not every line needs to start with a capital letter. If you added in punctuation and separated the sentences that way, it would be better, I think. More tightly woven and easier to follow.

-Jesse
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I love your writing style.
Fabulous. :]

I like the feel of this, and the flow. Very vibrant. The last two lines really culminate this well. Quite thought provoking. MD:77.

I love your descriptions of fall. "neon autumn" was such a great play on words. The whole kicking through leaves is great too. I can definitely relate to that.

I also like the part about the symphony, it was really great. It flowed well into the autumn thing. The second line was nice as well with the repetition.

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i'm working on a novel right now in which the portrayl of the awakening protagonist is compared to the opening strains of a symphony. but what i like best about this as it takes its place among the horde of autumn poems peppering fp during the last few weeks is the neon autumn, because it is an original perspective that is also instantly and automatically accurate.

"Trees painted in neon autumn
Carpet the ground with leaves
That we kicked through as we
Pretended to be strangers."

Beautiful autumn imagery, and I LOVED the part about pretending to be strangers. That idea is just so powerful.

Keep up the great work! :)
-Isca