Yay! So good to see a new chapter up! I had to re-read a few of the old ones to remember where we had left off. Good old Addie :) Thanks for posting!

I really like this story, and it seems very well written!

I LOVE this story! It is so sweet and it is also a great reminder not to take things for granted and to rely on God and not on out own strength. It was so great to find a story like this on this site. I've never come across a Christian story like this before. Thank you so much for sharing this wonderful story. I hope you'll write more like this one. I'd also like to know what happens with Conner and Gema, so some more chapters to this story or a sequal would be great!

Love your story! Hope you can find the time to update. I can't wait to find out what happens next between Conner and Gemma!

So, I've finally gotten back around to reviewing. Amazed, huh? I promised that I'll try to finish the story soon (I'm pretty addicted, anyhow. ;)) but with NaNoWriMo, it'll be hard to get the word quota in and do school work AND read. But, back to reviewing.

I think there's just something about the Connors in the world, huh? He's really funny in this chapter, leaving early just so he can catch her on the way there. Oh, how ever so clever. ;)

Garnet is sweet as well, wanting to kiss her brother's finger.

Great chapter, as always. .

Wow! It's been awhile since I've reviewed. And I'm so sorry for that. Life's been hectic. But let's get to the review...

I was so scared when Connor's family found that someone was living in the abandoned house and were planning on confronting Gemma et al. But she 'fessed up to Connor and he let them stay! That was a total relief! She's so lucky to have people who care for her and her family.

I'm sorry I can't say more. I absolutely love your writing! Your characters are so easily relatable and grab the reader from the get-go. Love this!

And the truth comes out! Poor Gemma! Poor Connor! Oh it just keeps getting better and better! Can't wait for the next update!

So glad that's finally out in the open! It will be interesting to see what Gemma does with the place now that she knows it belongs to Connor. Also, I wonder what Connor is going to do to the place, sounds like he has some good ideas. Yay, they're so cute, I just love them :) I can't wait for Connor...or Gemma, to make their move!

oh, Connor... :swoon: he was so lovely at tehe beginning. Wow, i didn't expect them to resolve that so quick! I was thinking oh how awkward: one last romantic dinner with Connor before getting chucked out... XD but there you go, reality and common sense prevails ;) That's not the end though, is it?

Absolutely lovely story, I am so enjoying it...great update...I am rooting for Gemma and Connor

:)

The truth (partially) comes out! AH! Update, update, update! PLEASE!

Oh no! I completely forgot he owned the house! Oh dear, this is awkward. Loved the last line. Will gemma stay and face him or run and be miserable forever? :S I love how Gemma feels the weight of her troubles and how Connor makes her happy. I especially love him with the kids, so sweet. Garnet was great!

I am so glad to see an update for this one! Imagine my surprise to find an alert in my mail box. And let me tell you it made my otherwise crappy day into something nice...:)

Gemma and Connor, come on and talk about how you feel...

Cheers

I love that his dream has faces now! It definitely does too. It's obvious that he loves Gemma's children just as much as he loves her. I was so excited to read this update! It's just great :) Can't wait to see what happens next!

ooh, you had me worried there for a minute that Gemma was going to think Connor was getting tired of her (after getting her that present and all? really!), but at last, at last! she might be cottoning onto to how much he likes her. hurrah! I love how she's all put out that she doesn't get offered candy though ;)