I love this story and Fire On Babylon, just wondering if you could make more stories like this one and Fire On Babylon because they're very inspiring.

I totally enjoyed this. The scene where Sam reacted badly to Kate's features was really well done. Very heart-wrenching. And Afsana just sounds adorable.

:D Would have loved to have been able to read more about the two of them, as the ending seemed a tad abrupt, but it was very cute nevertheless.

Interesting but I like it. Cant wait to see what happens next. Keep it up!