thats some funny **...lol

keep writing

~smurf~

Please, please, please, update! This is insanely hilarious and you are such an amazing author. I've been waiting for you to update for what feels like forever, when I got this break-through thought: I should review! So please update. lol.

(Am reviewing everyone who ever reviewed my Cinderella story)

and I was laughing my ** off at the story, it's fun and it reads well. I like it. Wish that you would update soon, and keep up the good job.

PB

What does thrown over even mean, loserr? Joking. But seriously, what does it mean?

And, may I just say, this is an exceptional start to the story. :D
I'll leave off Nazi-dom for now. Ok?

bye lovees.

Ahahahahhaa, can't wait to find out what the next video is about :)

Hiya

I abso-bloomin-lutely love this story. Its excellenté. Please update soon!! Dirk and Danny are such creeps eek.

Love the story so far...just wondering if you're gonna keep it up? 'cause you said something like "i'll try to update on sat"...and that was oct. last year :D

it would suck...a lot if you didnt
x

... It's way past 'next Saturday'... [furrowed eyebrows] When do I get to read the next chapter?

okay dont delete this!
its amazing
and i also loved get even
as well i really like what you have so far of simple really
good luck :)

I really think that this will be cute, please don't delete it. Also, get even was spectacular

Haha, this is interesting so far. I really want to know what happens with Dirk, Jason and that pop star Zach.

This was a great line: Basically, they convinced my extremely naive mind that the internet was the best thing since sliced bread.

LOL! This is going on my alerts. Hope you update soon and thanks for reading my stories!

KatieTheWriter :)

Haha, I love the word "thrown-over." That's good. And I thought this was good, though it seemed rushed and should be edited just a little because it was confusing who was talking or coming in the scene at parts.

But other than that, I love the idea and plot! Good job! And I like the name Bailey. And of course, the main character's name, Katie lol.

1, very much so~ 2, no i dont think she will~3, i am not confused at all :)

why do i have a feeling that, that last admission of never groveling is going to lead to a scene of her groveling? I can just see her pathetically, but altogether humorously, on her knees asking someone to help her... lol or someone blackmailing her.

I think a sentance was cut off, shotly after "The Pelvis Punch" where the sentace goes, "Typically..."

and is Sweden supposed to be "sweeden"?

other than that, good addition!
my i note she sounds like a complete tease when you mention her being a virgin and dating that many people...just throwing it out there.

Delanie