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igot4 2009-10-26 . chapter 9
This story is so sweet, I like how Austin stands up for himself when it comes to he friends telling him who he should be with... update update dont stop keep it going
idiotndenial 2009-06-20 . chapter 9
please update i love this story
Crescent City Chick 2009-05-17 . chapter 9
Please don't just let this story die. It's REALLY really good. Don't just leave it unfinished. I hope you write more. You're really talented.
Tasha 2009-02-20 . chapter 9
I love the story...I think my favorite aspect is how Kiya can be intimidating to most people, but Austin is not afraid of her at all. She can't help but be attracted to his strength with her :) They have got some serious chemistry going on (and I am not talking about class work)!

And the triplets are cute...my favorite is Noah...

I want to know more of what Kiya looks like...

And when are we going to find out what happened to her my and why dad is so out of it? I'm excited :)
Holly G 2009-02-19 . chapter 9
I really love this story. I hope you post more :D
Supergirl 2009-02-04 . chapter 1
I Really love this story. I'm DYING to know what come next. I can't wait for the date. :D Hope to read more soon
XxPunkbrat88xX 2009-01-28 . chapter 9
This is a great story. I really liked this chapter! Very sweet. I can't wait for their date and I hope Vik is completely out of the picture now.
As for Heather, I really hope she doesn't try to sabotage their blossoming relationship or try to make debate hard for Kiya. But I know that wish is moot.
Great job!
Myra Hodges 2009-01-11 . chapter 9
I can't wait to see what happens on the date. James seems like he's going to get on my nerves. Haha at Rose trying to make Austin jelaous.
sourgummyworms2007 2009-01-11 . chapter 9
nice little update. can't wait to see how they get together.
bwilkins 2009-01-11 . chapter 9
Thank You for the update! Finally, they are getting somewhere! Is James a racist or what? Get your man Kiya!!
Waiting impatiently for the next update!
Mascara is evil 2009-01-09 . chapter 9
Squeal... I'm so excited for the next chapter. Happy days happy days. Heather is a bitch. James is a wanker. Austin is sexy. Kiya is my hero. cause she knows how to hold her own and she gets Captain Austin! Yay her.
Writing4Eternity 2009-01-09 . chapter 9
“Friday I saw Mr. Green before I left for the day, he said he finished grading the pop quiz and I got a eighty-four."

It shoud be AN eighty-four not A eighty four.

Anyways, great chapter. Now we're getting somewhere.
Crescent City Chick 2009-01-09 . chapter 9
YAY!! I was so happy you posted early. Wed You said you'd post Saturday, but the next day it was up! :D Really great. I love how she got Heather. hahaha. I wonder if any trouble will come with James. I can't wait to see what you write next. You've got a talent cuz i'm on edge waiting! :D
reesiedoo 2009-01-09 . chapter 9
E!! This was a wonderful chapter. Very sexy and Heather's comeuppance at the party was icing on the cake. Uh, James is a dumbass. Just needed to get that out there.

Still, I hope Kiya is on the lookout for some serious shenanigans from Heather. That snake is going to strike and our girl should be prepared.

Loved it!
g 2009-01-08 . chapter 9
I'm disliking Kiya's father more and more, not to mention Heather and now James. I really want to know what Kiya's father's deal is.
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