Hmm... So I liked the chapter overall becuase it gave insight into Kiya's relationship with her dad which doesn't seem to be that great. She's a good older sister. I like the interaction between her and Austin but I don't really like how Rose and Ashlee lean over the desk to talk to one another because if Austin is in front of Ashlee that seems like it would have been difficult. Anyway that was slightly anal. I hope you update soon! Rose is an observant sister, I wonder if that will be a factor later on in the story.

I like this story! I hope theres more!

Looking real good.

sorry about the first review! update soon

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Good start...keep it coming!

Great start but don't be hating on MA...LOL. Looking forward to reading more. Thanks