|Reviews for The Move|
| Mascara is evil 11/18/08 . chapter 3
Hmm... So I liked the chapter overall becuase it gave insight into Kiya's relationship with her dad which doesn't seem to be that great. She's a good older sister. I like the interaction between her and Austin but I don't really like how Rose and Ashlee lean over the desk to talk to one another because if Austin is in front of Ashlee that seems like it would have been difficult. Anyway that was slightly anal. I hope you update soon! Rose is an observant sister, I wonder if that will be a factor later on in the story.
| sparks11 11/18/08 . chapter 3
I like this story! I hope theres more!
| grumpirah 11/15/08 . chapter 2
Looking real good.
| Writing4Eternity 11/14/08 . chapter 2
sorry about the first review! update soon
| Writing4Eternity 11/12/08 . chapter 1
| sjrucker 11/11/08 . chapter 1
Good start...keep it coming!
| Divisionred 11/11/08 . chapter 1
Great start but don't be hating on MA...LOL. Looking forward to reading more. Thanks