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Silly Little Songwriter 2009-11-13 . chapter 6
Aw, that was so sweet.
I'm getting a little teary there. Then again I am quite emotional at the mo.
There's nothing cuter than a good dad.
Jinxed Rogue 2009-10-30 . chapter 22
P.S. I think you should give Parker a story or something. Poor fellow has been quite neglected all series!
Jinxed Rogue 2009-10-28 . chapter 23
I'm a sucker for happy endings. I have to say the whole Elise thing was coming for a long way, and you're right, it did unravel a little too quickly. I think you could have fleshed it out a bit more. You're very good with your main characters, but your secondary characters and subplots often seem incomplete and then you rush to finish them before the story is up.

Best of luck with your publications! What I've read from you so far, I've really enjoyed. Your characters are really genuine and you can't help but love them. And like I said it before, I really like a writer who lets the girl play like one of the boys, just as tough. Thanks for trying something different.

Are there any other stories in this series that will come up in the future?
Jinxed Rogue 2009-10-28 . chapter 2
Okay, so the end of Chapter 1 gave it away that he was going to find out he had a secret kid somewhere, but I totally didn't see this coming. Very different from the usual path these stories take.
itsVKEE 2009-09-15 . chapter 8
it's sad, he loves Nat but finds it a pain in the arse when she wants things but hates to see her go but loves the fact that he doens't technically have to care for her. oh the joys of a love/hhate relationship. i think he's doing so well. single parent kinda deal. i think it'd be a lot of hard work, but hey we'll all be parents someday huh? great chapter i think i'm crying a bit ==; oops.
sappyromancelvr 2009-08-07 . chapter 23
I read this all in one sitting. Thanks for making my day with your wonderful writing! :]
You're amazing!
animegirl214 2009-08-03 . chapter 23
aw! its so darn cute! all ur storys should be published or something because it is AWESOME, BRILLIANT, LOVING, ADORABLE, and better then some published books that i've read. :D :D :D
thanks for the wonderful and great and awesome story! (and all ur other ones too!)
Summer Leah 2009-07-21 . chapter 16
I actually really liked this chapter, even though there wasn't much action. But hey, that's what fluff is.
Summer Leah 2009-07-21 . chapter 11
Just fyi--in this chapter you wrote Hannah Montana instead of Halee Marie. It's a little confusing.
Summer Leah 2009-07-21 . chapter 6
Aw, that chapter was so cute and warm and fuzzy! Yeah, I kinda feel like you did rush things, but it still worked. And since Nat is so young, it does make sense that she'd adjust quickly.
windlessnight 2009-07-16 . chapter 1
hey actually i had read all the story that is related to phone call from a rockstar ,but that time i did not have an account so i dint drop a review so now might be a little to late but still i hope is not too late to say that you are an amazing writer and i hope i can read more story that you write .^^


-best wish from me
Blue-Eyed Chica 2009-07-06 . chapter 23
LOVE IT! aww so cute!!
nevershoutnever 2009-04-27 . chapter 23
FANTASTIC.
I just finished read the phone call series is so cool.
It took me like a whole 2days to finish everything.
You should keep writing about them.
There life's are so interesting. . . is your life like that are you dating a rockstar or and NFL player OR OR SUPERMAN.
'cause that would be of the hook . . .
well continue the series think of something I think the whole things great. :)
-RAE
Katie 2009-04-14 . chapter 23
This story made me cry so many times! As someone who never knew her real father, the story line hits really close to home. It was written really well, and although parts were a little bit rushed, and perhaps there could have been fewer characters/more character development, it is definitely a story that the author should be very proud of.

This, quite honestly, will be remembered in the future as one of my favorite stories, thank you for producing such a fabulous creation!
babygurl-with-wings 2009-04-13 . chapter 23
this is the most cutest story ever !
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