holy geez

im starting to fall in love with this :D

Aw this sucks! :(
I liked this story but hopefully the next one is like this one. School is hard so understand that it has been hard to update. I hope to read the next story soon. :)

i thought it's a new chapter. i'm so sad you discontinue your story.
i really like this story. but if you want to write a new story similar to this. so i'll be waiting. see u soon ^_^

im still here and ready to read!!

hello! i really like your story.
lucian and cadence are really cute funny best couple.
please please update soon.

LAWL THIS IS SO GWD PAHA HURRY UP AND UPDATTE LAWL >:

okay this is me reviewing. and ranting. THIS IS A GREAT STORY!! AND I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS! YOU HAVE TO WRITE ANOTHER CHAPTER ASAP!! I CANT STAND IT! HURRY HURRY HURRY!! PLEASE? PLEASE? PLEASE? did i mention this is a great story and it SHOULD NOT be off and on!! it should only be ON!! so hurry!! okay. done ranting. now reviewing. this is a really good story and I like the way its written, I can really see what's happening. and I LOVE LULU!! this is a great great story and I think you honestly have alot of talent. okay. done reviewing and ranting. NOW BEGGING!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE WRITE MORE CHAPTERS~ okay. also I would like to say I am not usually this annoying. thank you.

I read it!! and I LOVE IT!! you're a really talented writer

I can't wait till the next chapter!

This chapter wasn't as good as the past chapters, but I'm hoping you continue to update and finish the story off with a bang! :)

The following is a rant over lack of updates "please update this story, it entertains me and the lack of updates make me feel :( That's right, not just sad but :( which is similar to sad but more extreme because a picture is worth a thousand words so I figure an emoticon is like 42 or something. In summary I like this story. :D

Aw! There like totally in love! I can see that! And I LOVE Cadence so much! She cracks me up! Anyways, please update as soon as you can, because I really do love this story! No severe pressure though, I get what stress is like!

I'm still reading this story! :)
This story is too goo to stop readingg!
I cannot wait for the next updatee, hopefully it's soon. ;)

My favorite chapter so far!
Wow. I must say, I totally DID NOT expect that XD Well done, though, I just 'met' David in this chapter, and already I hate him!
Hm... *gasp* Will Cadence get captured by the Mafia?
UPDATE SOON!!
~Sophia

this is such a good story! I just hope you can update faster~! and soon!~!