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xDantesLoverx 2009-11-07 . chapter 21
OHH I HATE STEPHANS PARENTS
I hope they burn in HELL
please do something awfully sadistic to them. stupid jerks.
anyway, very awesome. I like how noah is so protective off stephan.
And what with craig...im so curious
please keep writing I'm addicted
Esquirella 2009-11-05 . chapter 21
Whoah! I expected it to be bad ... but they were even worse than I thought! Poor Stephan! I like how Noah became his grounding point when his parents freaked him out. And the love scene after was perfect!
LEMonLoVerDeFiNaTeLy 2009-11-02 . chapter 21
I would never be able to imagine parents being that cruel to their own child...What they do to Stephan is absolutely terrible and they need to be put in some type of an institution because they are NOT right in the head for treating their own child like that! :(
HentaiZaru 2009-11-02 . chapter 21
I expected a physical confrontation, but I don't care. It's kind of preferable that Stephan vomits on his father's floor and shoes than getting punched in the face. Update soon!
Poptart Guava Kid 2009-11-02 . chapter 21
aw should've made stephan's dad get knocked-the-fuck-out! :D yme gusta mucho este capitulo (woo for my spanish!). thanks for the update!
JtheChosen1 2009-11-02 . chapter 21
Awesome work!
N.M.E 2009-11-02 . chapter 21
This chapter was very...intense. It was written very well. I enjoyed it thoroughly! One of the best! And Noah finally declares his love for Stephan openly! Even though Stephan probably didn't get it...lol. And seems that Stephan has also declared it eh? Except not maybe this straight-forwardly. :D Update soon! :D
Esioul 2009-11-02 . chapter 21
Oh my godess! You've outdone yourself again!! This chapter was amazing (as always).

The dinner part was truly fantastic! I was almost shouting go Noah through out the whole thing! Im so glad that it happened but I fear the consequenses (?) Stephans parents retaliation might not be so plesant.

And Noah finally said I love you!! I was litterary jumping up and down in my seat ;) It was so cute.

I loved the part where Stephan was jealous, I understand him. But Noahs explanation was cute so ^^

I've never heard of pansexual either, is it real?

And Alex and Jason are cute, I loved the line: "“Woman, you need to learn to buy your own lunch,” Jason narrows his eyes at her.

“I don’t need to, I have yours.”" Loveley :D

Oh and about the song I heard on the radio that reminded me of Secret Sun, I think it was a Depeche Mode song but Im not quite sure, I have a teflonmemory for somethings xD. Another amazing song i Love is my drug by a Swedish artist called John M.E, you should check it out, the lyrics are gorgeous ^^

Keep up the bloody amazing work :D

And Happy two-days after Halloween. Hope you had a wonderful Halloween, I did :D

/ Esioul

All your hard work paid of, the chapter was amazing!!
ThatAWay 2009-11-02 . chapter 21
Stephan's parents are so nasty! I think you wrote this chapter beautifully; I can believe it was hard for you because it was so real and intense. Good job.
xBrokenDreamsxEmptyPromisesx 2009-11-01 . chapter 21
Loved this chapter :D
Can't wait to see what happens next.
Hope Stephan's parent's don't make him move or something.
vicieanime 2009-11-01 . chapter 21
This chapter was very real, And the right was fantastic as always.
I am still hoping for reversed sex roles, let them mix it up a bit.
xXx.Fallen.Angel.xXx 2009-10-23 . chapter 20
Heya

I can soo see where this is going Lols
It's gonna be Hilarious!!

I like how u portrey the parents, but might be a tad better if they're just a little more ...ya know... evil like...or maybee thats just me. I guess it'd make Stephens reason for fearong them... n hating them that much a touch less shallow...

Anyways... I digress

Can't wait to read the next chapter!
Have it out soon!

Thankies
x
LEMonLoVerDeFiNaTeLy 2009-10-21 . chapter 20
YES! I can't wait for the dinner with the parentals! I would SO beat their A**es if I were Noah! I can't WAIT! XD
Izzy the Impossible 2009-10-21 . chapter 20
I can't wait for the next chapter, Love. It makes me smile :}
xBrokenDreamsxEmptyPromisesx 2009-10-21 . chapter 20
So good!
I'm glad tha Noah and Erika made up :)
I still feel really bad for Erika though because she loves him and he loves somebody else.
And dinner with Stephans parents will be interesting :)
Awesome chapter :D
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