|Reviews for Secret Sun|
| Nameless Shana 2/7/10 . chapter 6
I kind find it funny on how fast Stephan can become somber again after how many liqour bottles?
Well I guess Noah is going to become confused too
| Nameless Shana 2/7/10 . chapter 5
His parents kind of remind me of my parents. "All A's! all A's!" How does he buy beer?
Stephan does sound more 'human' in this chapter ..
| Nameless Shana 2/7/10 . chapter 4
wow, Erika's note was a little about Noah/. Usually love notes are about them o.o...
The two p.o.v's are really nice.
| Nameless Shana 2/7/10 . chapter 3
I'm loving both characters. .. I started laughing
-“What the hell was that for? You can’t just make out with me and then kick me out!” I screech, standing up and rubbing my tail bone.
“I just did. Now leave.”-
It was just to funny XD
| Chronically Creative 1/29/10 . chapter 1
Oh my god, I loved this story from start to finish and I feel satisfied that I knew exactly what happened with the rest of their life. That they died but a month a part... (tear.)
Wonderfully written, and your comparisons were amazing. Sun, moon, etc...just amazing.
Favorites, right now. :)
| Duuude 1/26/10 . chapter 30
omg. this is so beautiful.
I thought I finished reading it but I guess I forgot or something!
I love STEPHAN AND NOAH.
I LOVE THEM SOO MUCH.
I'm not sure I like the fact that they died off, I'd have preferred a sequel for when they met up in college. :(
but you can't get everything! I'm glad it was a happy ending, I thought it wasn't going to be for a while!
THANKS FOR AN AMAZING READ!
I LOVED IT.
And I thought I'd point out that I'm the 400th reader!
| LEMonSArTiFiCiAlVoDkAandChAiRs 1/26/10 . chapter 30
AW! T_T You just had to have them die in the end didn't you? It's the sweetest thing in the world but I don't even want to think of anyone dying after reading or seeing something so happy! I don't want Notebook tears! I watched it the other night and I cried enough for 10 people! No more happy/sad endings allowed! *cries*
| safe-quaint 1/25/10 . chapter 30
I'm just gonna preface this review by saying I really love this story. And I never really review things and this story is finished so I'm not really sure why I'm going to but anyway.
Well first, the storyline is pretty cliche. Two opposing characters who are forced together. But you know, whatever, there's no new story anymore, just interpretations of stories, whatever that is.
The thing I really really liked was a) your characters were not cliche, even if their roles were and b)they weren't all I HATE YOU I HATE YOU oh wait actually you're cute actually i love you! They fought but there was chemistry and positive energy(?) between them from the beginning and I love that.
I have never read a story where I liked having two different narrators but I definitely liked it in this. The voices were distinctive and the characters unique. Sometimes I felt like Stephan was too formal, like in an attempt to give him his own personality he became too much of a character. If that makes sense. Those times were rare though.
Also, I loved Erika, and I loved that Noah actually cared about her and she wasn't some dumb girl thrown in to...I don't know. It seems a lot of gay fiction makes women into bad people. I've had that problem and it was nice to see you avoid that.
So overall, I thought this was really good and I enjoyed it and I'm definitely going to check out your other stuff now.
| Epic Scarf 1/24/10 . chapter 30
this story was fucking amazing great job!
| Epic Scarf 1/24/10 . chapter 24
I actually really like emo depressed Noah
| Adventure-of-Love 1/23/10 . chapter 30
That was one of the most beautiful stories I've read. I'm not normally one for reading male male, but I lved this so much.
I cried, I actually cried, not just at the end, but when he left.
This story is amazing, thank you.
| Sister Kitty 1/22/10 . chapter 30
Yah it's finished!
I really like the last chapter, except
it felt kind of rushed.
I hope you feel better though and
I can't wait to read your random chapters!
| Mystic-Spiritus 1/22/10 . chapter 30
Finally! You don't know how long my friend and I have been checking constantly for the last epilogue!
AMAZING story, I don't have much more to say then that.
| AmandaHold 1/22/10 . chapter 30
Aww, I loved the ending. I'm a sucker for happily ever after. I wasn't sure if they were going to end up together when I read the last few chapter. I love Noah. He's adorable. I would love to see little glimpses into their life together.
| JtheChosen1 1/22/10 . chapter 30
Oh man...I was crying at the end! Seriously, can you write out my life story please? K thnx! Haha anyways, I hope you do some extras of this! One I'd really like to see is when Stephen confronts his parents and tells them that he and Noah are back together. Maybe he even extend the olive branch to them and invite them to his wedding. Its up to you thoguh, I can't wait!