This is poetically beautiful. I love the way you described everything, it was haunting and chilling and beautiful all at the same time. I envy your talent.

I would love opinions from a writer like yourself on my work! It would mean a lot.

this is like addictive dark magic, and i love it.

Your style is absolutely amazing. I can't even find words for it. It's really really magical.
I'm quietly fangirling you in my generic corner.

this is stunning; the detail, intriguing. please continue. i'm hooked.

Has anyone ever told you your style is reminiscent to Francesca Lia Block? If you lengthened each of your stories (although I'd prefer your current patterns :]) you can totally compete with her. Although I honestly like your writing better than hers (that's saying something I guess since she's published and everything and well known) because you're still young and your writing is so authentic in that way. it's young. I'm not stalking you or anything, so I don't know for sure if you're young and stuff, but through your writing that youth and modern-ness shows. Block is nice, but she's older and as you grow older, you grow more distant from us young adults. Your writing can connect to us in that way only young people can understand young people.

Idk. whoa I ranted. didn't intend to, but I just wanted to compliment you. good stories, btw.

I like the contrast between the vague imagery and then the very real description. Makes for interesting, poetic prose.

~Effervescent-Sentiments

This totally reminds me of the way Francessca Lia Block writes. Which is a compliment by the way. I love Francessca Lia Block. I love the meshing between poetry and fiction; the magical realism feel. This is so poetic and gorgeous.

And now I think of a boy I loved.

I find myself thinking of me..again..

This is disturbing, but I love it, anyway. You describe so much in such short paragraphs.