Now I'm beginning to see why your dads gf freaked out reading your poetry if this is the tame stuff.

Dude, this is amazing. It's depressing, but I really like it. It's nice and simple and fantastic.

*sigh* I wish that were so... maybe it would be easier to forget.

Im not sure I like this style of poem as much. I know a lot of people prefer it, and find it more 'artistic' but I dont know. It sounded good regardless :D