 Smiling Serenade 2008-12-23 . chapter 1The last three lines are amazing.
The idea of the reflection plays out more than just on a mirror.
It gives your entire poem another meaning.
It turns it into a sort of monologue.
I really enjoyed reading this. (: |
 daughterofmusic 2008-12-02 . chapter 1Very, very nice. I love the little twist at the end - "get out of my mirror."
~Music |
 Ash626 2008-12-01 . chapter 1I really loved the last three lines |
 Bonnie 2008-11-17 . chapter 1 Very good. You have really captured the frustration of being yourself and knowing that you are messing stuff up, but not being able to help it. Thank you for posting. |
 fictionalboyfriend 2008-11-12 . chapter 1Wow.
The last three lines were exactly right. You pretty much put your finger on it. |