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Smiling Serenade 2008-12-23 . chapter 1
The last three lines are amazing.
The idea of the reflection plays out more than just on a mirror.
It gives your entire poem another meaning.
It turns it into a sort of monologue.
I really enjoyed reading this. (:
daughterofmusic 2008-12-02 . chapter 1
Very, very nice. I love the little twist at the end - "get out of my mirror."
~Music
Ash626 2008-12-01 . chapter 1
I really loved the last three lines
Bonnie 2008-11-17 . chapter 1
Very good. You have really captured the frustration of being yourself and knowing that you are messing stuff up, but not being able to help it. Thank you for posting.
fictionalboyfriend 2008-11-12 . chapter 1
Wow.
The last three lines were exactly right. You pretty much put your finger on it.
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