The concept of this story was fascinating, and the imagery was beautiful. I would love to see this story continued, expanded upon, and fleshed out; I feel as though it could be very interesting and engaging. Thank you for posting this; it was lovely.

Your stories are so amazing but some are also so sad.

You have one wonderful imagination that i must praise.

I diden't like it much but that maybe because I that it would be something diffrent then ehat it tirned out to be