|Reviews for Voluntary Fright|
| fictionullFreaK 12/13/10 . chapter 1
This was really good. There were a few punctuation errors, but other than that it was well-written.
I really liked the part about misspelling 'I love you', because it adds a very human touch to it. I think we've all made those typos in a moment of anxiety.
The last line was epic.