Holy fuck... I can't believe you managed to get this so right... This is me. A perfect fucking description of me...

I like the italics and the parenthesis at the end, they definitely added something to the piece. I also liked the repetition of that one line. It definitely drives home the point that people want to stop addictions, but can't. Great piece. I can definitely relate.

PS If you're bored check out the Review Game and/or its Review Marathon.

i think you just need to find something better in your life to replace it. find something or someone who helps you relieve that same feeling.