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simpleplan13 2008-11-23 . chapter 1
I like the italics and the parenthesis at the end, they definitely added something to the piece. I also liked the repetition of that one line. It definitely drives home the point that people want to stop addictions, but can't. Great piece. I can definitely relate.

PS If you're bored check out the Review Game and/or its Review Marathon.
Soulzityr 2008-11-13 . chapter 1
i think you just need to find something better in your life to replace it. find something or someone who helps you relieve that same feeling.
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