ACH!! I havn't been on this computer enough! I havn't been on sice they changed the whole sight! (sad huh) AND I COULDN'T FIGURE OUT HOW TO REVEIW YOU! But now I know how after poking around with my mouse for half an hour when the button was right in front of my face...GR...

ANYWAY...Very nicely done I must say, but what do I expect from your poetry? I always know that it's going to be a good read when I see something of yours!
I really like the lines:

Torch your effigy
The ashes and dibris
All thats left of you
And all that's left of me

It leaves an empty feeling in the pit of my stomache..Which wouldn't be a good thing except the fact that this is supposed to be heart breaking...So really it's a VERY GOOD THING! I really liked the emotion and the breaking quality of this poem..GOOD WORK!